Max ran as fast as he could, he turned in to an ally and hid behind the dumpster. 'Weho wheo' It pased with out noticing him. he ran to the grave yars (his hide out) thats when he heard the hiss of his
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Hey, check out my blog and I'll post as I write my book. It's about 10 kids with wings. Other than that, NOTHING to do with Maximum Ride. New characters, new powers, new bad guys, all together new story plot.
The wind made an odd sound as it moved quickly through the woods, and we moved just as fast, winding our way through the woods like shadows. Li was moving alongside me, he was impossible to see, I could only be sure he was there by the sound of his breathing. The others were following closely. Suddenly I heard Albina cry out; Li left my side and returned almost instantly, “They know we’re here.” He said darkly. “I know,” I whispered, “They’ve been hot on our trail for days.” And they had, every now and then they’d get too close, and a gunshot would sound, making us all break into a run, the ten of us were running out of places to hide. “Arrow,” A small voice came from behind me, Kiri’s voice. “Will they catch us?” “Not if I can help it.” I said defiantly. “What if they do?” She sounded scared. “They won’t.” I finished, scooping the little five- year old up. We had been running for days, everyone was tired, Li had carried Kiri after she had almost collapsed. We needed to find food, and fast. Suddenly, Li stopped, he held perfectly still, and listened. Then, without warning, he changed into a wolf.
Chapter 2
(Yeah, we can transform into wolves, so what? Anyway, more on that later.) He began to slink forward; I transformed and waited for him to give the signal. He moved like a shadow, weaving his way through the bushes, his movements as fluid as a snake’s. He stopped abruptly, flicked his tail, the signal, and pounced. I leaped, and the rest of the pack followed, we crashed through the bushes and saw the deer. Li was already tearing at its throat, leaving deep gashes wherever he struck. Out of the corner of my eye I saw a flash of white fur as Albina rushed the deer. She leaped towards the deer, sailing through the air, and found her mark on the deer’s neck. She clamped on next to Li, and they both hung on tight. I could tell that the deer was weakening. Its attempts to shake off the two determined wolves were less. Finally, I leapt in to deliver the final blow. It fell dead, and we feasted. (Yeah, I know what you’re thinking: If we’re kids, why did we eat raw meat? Well, the wolf part of us is able to digest anything that real wolves were able to, so we can.) I looked up from the feast, Li was gone.
Chapter 3
I got up and looked around, I couldn’t see him anywhere. Suddenly, Li crashed through the bushes. “They’re here!” He howled. “Move!” I barked, adrenaline rushing through my veins. We shot out of there like bullets, fueled by panic. Gunshots exploded the trees around us, making us run even faster. Oh if only we knew how to fly. I thought bitterly. Li veered to the left, the rest of the pack followed. Then, we all transformed back, and dove into an icy stream. Chapter 4
We swam for a while to throw them off our scent; they had freaking dogs, which made it a heck of a lot harder for us. I built a fire for us to dry our wings. Yeah, didn’t I tell you? Oh, well, we have wings. We’re not sure how we got them, but we did. The only problem is, we don’t know the first thing about flying. “Is everyone okay?” I asked. I got mixed replies from everyone. Everyone seemed okay. The ten of us, me, Li, Ciri, Kiri, Albina, Ashlyn, Star, Luca, Matt, and Rika, sat around the fire, trying to dry our wings as much as we could. Li stood up, “We should really get some rest,” He announced, “I’ll take first watch.” I yawned and stretched, “That sounds great,” I said, “We really need it.” So, Li took first watch. I was awakened in the night by Li howling. We were under attack.
Chapter 5
I leaped up, already transformed. Li was fighting two dogs at once. “Everyone up!” I yelled, rushing the nearest officer. You see, to add to our nightmare, there were heavily armed psychos after us, trying to catch us, study us, and put us in zoos. The rest of the pack was up within seconds, throwing themselves at the MRS (Mutant Retrieval Squad) Officers. One of the dogs lay in a pool of blood; the other was snapping and snarling at Li. Luca, Matt, and Rika were crouched back-to-back, growling and bristling as several officers surrounded them. From behind, in a flash of silvery fur, Ashlyn was on top of one of three officers who had been knocked off their feet in the frenzied attack. I had my own problems to deal with; five dogs had ganged up on me and were slowly closing in. Kiri and Ciri were behind me, both were snarling and bristling. Li was suddenly beside me, snarling viciously. He was about my age, but he was also about 2 inches taller. At the sight of him, bristling and snarling ferociously, one dog whimpered but they still kept advancing on us, though a little more cautiously. Then, almost too fast to see, Li made his move, one dog lay dead, while another was bleeding and looked stunned as if he didn’t know what had just happened, then he too dropped dead. Officers came to the dog’s aid, armed and ready. Li attacked again, leaving deep gashes in the side of one dog’s leg. One officer fired, aiming at Li, a net shot out, knocking Li off his feet and closing around him as he sailed across the clearing. He hit a tree almost twenty feet away with a thunk. Enraged, I leaped at the officer who had fired and managed to take a chunk out of his arm, and then the dogs were upon me. I lashed out, striking one across the muzzle, leaving large gashes. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Li being dragged towards a truck well hidden in the bushes. He was perfectly still, seemingly unconscious. They opened the net to transfer him to a cage, big mistake. He leaped out of the cage just as the door was closing. Three seconds later, five officers were on the ground before they knew what had hit them. Li hit the ground running; he was headed straight towards me, ready to fight. A shot rang out; Li stumbled, his shoulder red with blood, and fell.
Chapter 6
I attacked in a frenzied rage, furious beyond comprehension, and with good reason to be, they had shot down one of the pack, turning me into a demon, striking out everywhere. One, two, three officers went down. The rest were already piling into the car. They sped out of the clearing, dirt flying from under the tires. They were gone, I rushed over to Li, transforming back as I ran. He was bleeding still, but it looked like the bullet had only clipped his shoulder, but at such close range it had packed a lot of power. Li had been knocked to the ground by the force of the shot and was barely conscious, he was no longer transformed, pain short-circuits our powers. “Is he okay?” asked Kiri. “He’s fine,” I said, relieved. “Looks like it hurt,” said Star, trotting up to where we were sitting. “Not really,” mumbled Li. “He lives!” yelled Star, Li scowled. “Let’s go,” Li said, getting up, “Those bozos could be anywhere.” He dusted himself off, but cringed and stopped, examining his shoulder. “Those idiots,” he mumbled under his breath.
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Hey, check out my blog and I'll post as I write my book. It's about 10 kids with wings. Other than that, NOTHING to do with Maximum Ride. New characters, new powers, new bad guys, all together new story plot.
Thanks 4 the comment, here's the book so far.
The wind made an odd sound as it moved quickly through the woods, and we moved just as fast, winding our way through the woods like shadows. Li was moving alongside me, he was impossible to see, I could only be sure he was there by the sound of his breathing. The others were following closely. Suddenly I heard Albina cry out; Li left my side and returned almost instantly, “They know we’re here.” He said darkly.
“I know,” I whispered, “They’ve been hot on our trail for days.” And they had, every now and then they’d get too close, and a gunshot would sound, making us all break into a run, the ten of us were running out of places to hide.
“Arrow,” A small voice came from behind me, Kiri’s voice. “Will they catch us?”
“Not if I can help it.” I said defiantly.
“What if they do?” She sounded scared.
“They won’t.” I finished, scooping the little five- year old up.
We had been running for days, everyone was tired, Li had carried Kiri after she had almost collapsed. We needed to find food, and fast. Suddenly, Li stopped, he held perfectly still, and listened. Then, without warning, he changed into a wolf.
Chapter 2
(Yeah, we can transform into wolves, so what? Anyway, more on that later.)
He began to slink forward; I transformed and waited for him to give the signal. He moved like a shadow, weaving his way through the bushes, his movements as fluid as a snake’s. He stopped abruptly, flicked his tail, the signal, and pounced.
I leaped, and the rest of the pack followed, we crashed through the bushes and saw the deer. Li was already tearing at its throat, leaving deep gashes wherever he struck. Out of the corner of my eye I saw a flash of white fur as Albina rushed the deer. She leaped towards the deer, sailing through the air, and found her mark on the deer’s neck. She clamped on next to Li, and they both hung on tight. I could tell that the deer was weakening. Its attempts to shake off the two determined wolves were less. Finally, I leapt in to deliver the final blow. It fell dead, and we feasted. (Yeah, I know what you’re thinking: If we’re kids, why did we eat raw meat? Well, the wolf part of us is able to digest anything that real wolves were able to, so we can.)
I looked up from the feast, Li was gone.
Chapter 3
I got up and looked around, I couldn’t see him anywhere.
Suddenly, Li crashed through the bushes. “They’re here!” He howled.
“Move!” I barked, adrenaline rushing through my veins. We shot out of there like bullets, fueled by panic.
Gunshots exploded the trees around us, making us run even faster.
Oh if only we knew how to fly. I thought bitterly. Li veered to the left, the rest of the pack followed. Then, we all transformed back, and dove into an icy stream.
Chapter 4
We swam for a while to throw them off our scent; they had freaking dogs, which made it a heck of a lot harder for us.
I built a fire for us to dry our wings. Yeah, didn’t I tell you? Oh, well, we have wings. We’re not sure how we got them, but we did. The only problem is, we don’t know the first thing about flying.
“Is everyone okay?” I asked.
I got mixed replies from everyone. Everyone seemed okay. The ten of us, me, Li, Ciri, Kiri, Albina, Ashlyn, Star, Luca, Matt, and Rika, sat around the fire, trying to dry our wings as much as we could.
Li stood up, “We should really get some rest,” He announced, “I’ll take first watch.”
I yawned and stretched, “That sounds great,” I said, “We really need it.”
So, Li took first watch. I was awakened in the night by Li howling.
We were under attack.
Chapter 5
I leaped up, already transformed. Li was fighting two dogs at once.
“Everyone up!” I yelled, rushing the nearest officer. You see, to add to our nightmare, there were heavily armed psychos after us, trying to catch us, study us, and put us in zoos. The rest of the pack was up within seconds, throwing themselves at the MRS (Mutant Retrieval Squad) Officers.
One of the dogs lay in a pool of blood; the other was snapping and snarling at Li. Luca, Matt, and Rika were crouched back-to-back, growling and bristling as several officers surrounded them. From behind, in a flash of silvery fur, Ashlyn was on top of one of three officers who had been knocked off their feet in the frenzied attack.
I had my own problems to deal with; five dogs had ganged up on me and were slowly closing in. Kiri and Ciri were behind me, both were snarling and bristling. Li was suddenly beside me, snarling viciously. He was about my age, but he was also about 2 inches taller. At the sight of him, bristling and snarling ferociously, one dog whimpered but they still kept advancing on us, though a little more cautiously.
Then, almost too fast to see, Li made his move, one dog lay dead, while another was bleeding and looked stunned as if he didn’t know what had just happened, then he too dropped dead. Officers came to the dog’s aid, armed and ready. Li attacked again, leaving deep gashes in the side of one dog’s leg.
One officer fired, aiming at Li, a net shot out, knocking Li off his feet and closing around him as he sailed across the clearing. He hit a tree almost twenty feet away with a thunk.
Enraged, I leaped at the officer who had fired and managed to take a chunk out of his arm, and then the dogs were upon me. I lashed out, striking one across the muzzle, leaving large gashes. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Li being dragged towards a truck well hidden in the bushes. He was perfectly still, seemingly unconscious. They opened the net to transfer him to a cage, big mistake. He leaped out of the cage just as the door was closing. Three seconds later, five officers were on the ground before they knew what had hit them.
Li hit the ground running; he was headed straight towards me, ready to fight. A shot rang out; Li stumbled, his shoulder red with blood, and fell.
Chapter 6
I attacked in a frenzied rage, furious beyond comprehension, and with good reason to be, they had shot down one of the pack, turning me into a demon, striking out everywhere. One, two, three officers went down. The rest were already piling into the car. They sped out of the clearing, dirt flying from under the tires. They were gone, I rushed over to Li, transforming back as I ran. He was bleeding still, but it looked like the bullet had only clipped his shoulder, but at such close range it had packed a lot of power. Li had been knocked to the ground by the force of the shot and was barely conscious, he was no longer transformed, pain short-circuits our powers. “Is he okay?” asked Kiri.
“He’s fine,” I said, relieved.
“Looks like it hurt,” said Star, trotting up to where we were sitting.
“Not really,” mumbled Li.
“He lives!” yelled Star, Li scowled.
“Let’s go,” Li said, getting up, “Those bozos could be anywhere.” He dusted himself off, but cringed and stopped, examining his shoulder. “Those idiots,” he mumbled under his breath.
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